Michael's homework

Michael has very kindly given me permission to post the story he wrote for homework on here for everyone to read. Thanks Michael!

Robin Hood and the bath of death

Once upon a time there was a boy called Robin Hood. He was a lovely boy, a hero, but he had a fear of bath. Now, you might find that funny but actually in the olden times, before Robin lived in a forest he made the world’s horrific mistake, he made a deal with the devil. His deal was that he will finish his work the devil will stop hunting him. Now very one knows that if you make a deal with a devil, the devil can trick you. So the devil kept spying on Robin and found out that Robin is afraid of bathing. So the devil made a horrible curse. He said ‘on his sixteenth birthday the boy will start to go into the water where he will be drowned by the mermaids of death (vampires) and only bones will be shown in the water.

Now you understand that Robin was in grave danger. On the 19^th of September 1607 robin and his friends were having fun, drinking, dancing, as all of a sudden they heard screams and panic in the castle. Everyone froze, little john asked everyone in horror: ‘what on earth was that sound. Is it me or did I just hear something in the bushes’. Robin Hood said tempted: ‘everybody gather your staff, we’re going on a spirit hunt.’

In about five minutes the group was ready to go and save the poor. As soon as they got to the village the whole place was deserted and the people were all lying on the ground, dead except there was a girl standing in the middle of the road saying: ‘death is upon you all especially you Robin son of the lost lost king’ and then behind her appeared these weird creatures which had no eyes on noses, just moths teeth shaped like spikes. As soon as the girl died her spirit flew into Robin’s body he was forced to go into the lake where the vampires were waiting for the food to arrive and as soon as it did only bones were left and his were all dead, shredded into small pieces if meat.